Recollect those days?
We decided to climb high,
Behold the vista,
Scream out our sorrows, with joy,
But life’s course made us part ways……
This is my first attempt at writing a tanka:
The tanka is a thirty-one-syllable poem, is better known in its five-line, 5/7/5/7/7 syllable count form.
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