Unfulfilled

Recollect those days?

We decided to climb high,

Behold the vista,

Scream out our sorrows, with joy,

But life’s course made us part ways……

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This is my first attempt at writing a tanka:

The tanka is a thirty-one-syllable poem, is better known in its five-line, 5/7/5/7/7 syllable count form.

Do share your feedback.

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In response to:

Thursday Photo Prompt: Vista

Thank you!!