Dancing her spirits out, it’s not a show,
Completely lost like, there’s no tomorrow.
Under the sprinkling waters, that blow,
Straight, dare head into the sky, and flow.
Washing away her bottomless sorrows,
Bidding them adieu to endless morrows.
The world around stares and follows,
But their thoughts, she wouldn’t borrow.
Rejoicing in symmetry too, her shadows,
Under the light, rippling water, that throws.
Her soul, dances against the spectral bestow,
As a free bird, under the high blue’s brow.
She’ll dance her spirits out and always glow,
Fending away the fretting world and tomorrow.
This post was written in response to What do you see #44. I thank Sadje for hosting this challenge. The challenge was to write a poem or a prose on the picture provided.
Thank you!
Β©Aashi D Parekh
Absolutely enriching π€©
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The spirit of absolute freedom, well expressed Aashi π
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I’m so happy you liked itπ€β€
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That is wonderful feeling which canβt be expressed in words. A beautiful try ππ
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Aashi this is fantastic take ππ
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Thanks a lotπ€π
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Wowπ€©
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Amazing!
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Thank you βΊ
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Love the spirit of this poem. Thanks for joining in the challenge Aashi
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Thanks for appreciating ππ
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Youβre welcome π
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Great poem, Aashi. It reads really well, with the ebb and flow of the sounds of the words. π
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Thank you very muchπ Glad you liked it!π
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Feel good poem! I also enjoyed the rhyming sounds throughout.
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Glad you appreciate it!πβ£
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This is so delightful! Left me with this cathartic feeling. Excellent writing!
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I’m so glad it made you feel so! Thank youπ
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Beautiful!!
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I loved the rhyme and I loved the phrase βhigh blues browβ .. very apt here πbeautiful take Aashi
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Thanks for all the loveβ€ I’m glad you liked itπ€
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Powerful lines, each word stands beautifully off the page π¦
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Thank you so muchπ€β£
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Itβs always a pleasure π€π·
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Lovely how a dance can make us free. Beautiful poem! βππ
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Thanks a lotπ€
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Nicely done, loving the line construction β€οΈ
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Thank youπ
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Wow…..and yes I really like the rhymes that you have used..must say you have done your full effort to this.π
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Glad you think so! Thanksππ
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Lovely writing!! Well expressed photo π₯°
Don’t forget to Glee and spread Sparkles β¨
-Nani π
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Thank youβΊπ
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Beautiful rhythm and verse. Strong too
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Thank you very much!!
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My pleasure Aashi
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I love this line: “The world around stares and follows” — Brilliant!
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I’m so glad you liked it!!π
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Enchanting reading experience. I’m filled with air and wind.
Followed you, βΊοΈ
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Thank you so muchπ
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You’re welcome
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When we really enjoy doing something, we get lost in it!
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That’s true! π
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