To touch those cotton clouds white,
In colourful balloon, I’ll fly high,
I’ll reach the heights, infinite.
In it’s shelter, the sun smiles bright,
In the sky above my dreams afloat lie,
To touch those cotton clouds white.
Hangs about my heart, a little fright,
It’s outstared, with courage’s eye,
I’ll reach the heights, infinite.
Myriad of hues, have taken their flight,
A strong head, daring! Iffy they defy,
To touch those cotton clouds white.
At times, chances of touching, bright,
Far afar in a jiffy, away cottons fly,
I’ll reach the heights, infinite.
When time’s on my side ,dreams, I’ll unite,
Till then, each part of me will try and try,
To touch those cotton clouds white,
I’ll reach the heights, infinite……
For those who don’t know, this form of poetry is called a villanelle. A villanelle is a fixed-form poem consisting of five tercets and a quatrain and also follows a specific rhyme scheme using only two different sounds. Thus, the villanelle has nineteen total lines. There is also a pattern of two refrains, which are repeated lines in a poem or verse. Therefore, in a villanelle, two different lines repeat throughout the poem. Specifically, the first line recurs as lines 6, 12, and 18, and the third line recurs as lines 9, 15, and 19.In addition, the pattern becomes even more complex with a specific rhyme scheme. In a villanelle, the rhyme scheme is ABA ABA ABA ABA ABA ABAA.
This post was written in response to What do you see #45. I thank Sadje for hosting this challenge. The challenge was to write a poem or a prose on the picture provided.
Thank you!
©Aashi D Parekh
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Excellent poem!! Loved it 😍😍
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Thanks for your appreciation ☺💜
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Awesome!😍❤️
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Thanks a lot🙂
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That was brilliant, Aashi❤️
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Thank you😊 Glad you liked it!!
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Love your uplifting poem. Thanks for joining in the challenge
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Thank you very much😇💕
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You’re welcome 😉
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What a lovely Villanelle, so well composed and uplifting in spirit. I love Villanelles but find them difficult to write! 🙏❤🧡💛💚💙💜🙏
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Thanks a lot😊!! Your wonderful comment just made my day💝
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You are very welcome Aashi, you have inspired me to try writing another one! 😆🤣
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That’s great to hear!!
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Nice effort Aashi … very well done .. loved the poem 😊
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Thank you🤗❤
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Wow! Impressive.
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Thank you so much😊❣
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Wow!! Its really fabulous 👍👍
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Thanks💜💜
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Amazing as usual! 😍 Loved it! Will try writing villanelle someday.
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Thank you!! Hope to read yours soon🙂
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Beautiful as always, my dear friend 💖
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Thank you🤗
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It’s a pleasure 🌺🌸
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Wonderful poem Aashi. Thanks for sharing a new style of poetry!
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Thanks a lot!!
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It’s so joyous and light hearted!❤❤
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Glad you liked it☺❤
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Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing this style, Aashi. 🙂
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Thank you😇💝
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You are welcome, Aashi. 🙂
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Beautiful, Villanelle! Lovely and uplifting.
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Thanks a lot💕💕
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Beautiful one !🌼
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You’re welcome!
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That’s a lot of effort. You’ve very well accomodated the pattern and presented enriching content. Great poem!
This form of poetry is new to me. Thanks for detailing!
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Thank you very much for this encouraging comment❤❤❤
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