
Oh my little birdie, fly high
High into that limitless sky
To well deliver my little plea
To the Above One, you see?
Who has turned a deaf ear
To our muddles, seem mere
Pray him, to heal the world
Of all that is to be transformed
Burning wrath to be effaced
Cold hostility to warm embrace
This post was written in response to What do you see #49. I thank Sadje for hosting this challenge. The challenge was to write a poem or a prose on the picture provided.
Thank you!
ยฉAashi D Parekh
A beautiful message to be sent to the heavens above Aashi. But, I think to a large extent, we are responsible for the mess we are in today.
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Yes, it is the man whose causing harm to the nature and calling destruction upon himself. It’s my plea to the heavens to gift that sense of right judgement to man. Thanks for reading!๐๐
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Amen ๐
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Yes๐๐
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Such a moving poem Aashi. Thanks for joining in the challenge
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Thank you๐โฃ
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Youโre welcome
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Beautiful poem!๐
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Thank you for reading ๐
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Fabulous one ๐ โค
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Thank you๐ค
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Wow Aashi! Such a beautiful poem with a beautiful message….I love itโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธ
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Thank you very much Ishita๐โค
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A great message wrapped up in a lovely poem!
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Glad you liked it๐
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Beautifully penned!
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Thank you๐
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Such a heartfelt message, Aashi. I hope that the plea is heard. Brilliant take on the prompt
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Hope He gives a ear. Thank you ๐๐
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My pleasure ๐
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A beautiful and sombre plea and prayer๐งก๐ผ
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Thanks a lot๐๐
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My pleasure Aashi
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Lovely message and a beautiful poem Aashi ๐
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Thank you so much๐๐
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Lovely !โค๏ธ
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Thanks a lot!!
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A wonderful message conveyed, dear ๐ superb lines!
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Thank you so much๐๐
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