You just left for that abode of the gods,
Leaving all of us in this abyss of chaos.
Gifting us a lifetime of painful tears,
Immovable weight our heart bears.
Turning our conscience inert, numb,
Silencing our voice to a show of dumb.
Turning dim the light of our lives,
In the ocean of nothingness, mind dives.
Our souls have become hollow forever,
Emotions dropped shallow as never.
Waiting for our breath to break,
The life left, induces immense ache.
With this existence, merely a dark room,
Your melancholy has snapped this loom.
It all seems to be hurting and vice,
You turned out the nemesis of your own life.
Note: This is purely a work of fiction, not referring to any individual.
Thank you!
Its beautifully agonizing…πππ
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Thank you π
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Powerful and painful.
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Thank you!
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The melancholic ache oozes through your words Aashi. Well written β₯οΈ
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Thank you so much!!
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Thanks π€
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I am speechless π
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Thanks!!
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Anytime π
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This is amazingly well written. Thank you.
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I thank you for appreciating it!
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Beautifully written. Although it was fictional, it hits close to home
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Thank you!!
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My pleasure π
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Beautifully penned feelings… π
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Thanks a lot!!
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Congratulations Aashi! I have nominated you for the Kennedy Award For Excellence, please see my blog post under the same name for details! I look forward to reading your response to the questions upon acceptance of the award! πππππ
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Thanks for nominating my blog!!
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Your welcome!! I look forward to reading your response to the questions upon acceptance of the award! πππππ
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Simply amazing πππ»good read
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Thank you so much!
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Beautyyyβ€
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Thanksπ€
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