The dark fickle clouds glided in,
Completely shading the mighty sun,
Eager for striking my dead ground,
A perfect setup made to reform,
A fierce storm to rage within,
The dark purple clouds roared,
Inviting the great storms within,
A storm of fresh, diverse ideas,
A storm of firm grit, determination,
A storm of precious swayed passion,
A storm of a great revolution,
A sudden spark, a lightning,
An awakening, an introduction,
Of the real me to the frail me,
Walking out of the storm of change,
I realise that I’m not the same,
Next the real calm that came,
The storm, forever kindled a flame…
This post was written in response to Thursday Poetry Competition, hosted by H.R Phoenix. The challenge was to write a poem on storm.
Thank you!
Β©Aashi D Parekh. All rights reserved.
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Thanks Kim!!
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Aashi, change is rejuvenation. To me, your poem expresses a rejuvenation experience. I’m not sure if that’s the intended meaning, but I like the poem very much! All the best! Cheryl
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Yes that’s exactly what I meant! Thanks a lotππ
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This piece is phenomenal!!! I love the strong imagery and pronounced messageππ»
“The dark fickle clouds glided in,
Completely shading the mighty sun”
Wow…π
“Walking out of the storm of change,
I realise that Iβm not the same,
Next the real calm that came,
The storm, forever kindled a flame⦔
The ending is AMAZING!!!
Wonderful work Aashiβ₯οΈπ
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Thank you very much π I’m glad you loved itπ€
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This is such a strong poem. Flamboyant and poignant words. Can be felt in so many places and it is a wonderful feeling indeed.
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Glad you could feel it! Thanks a lotππ
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I very much did. My pleasure A! Peace βοΈ
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Itβs a beautiful, strong poem Aashi … well penned ..
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Thank you so muchπ
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Wow! Amazing take!!
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Thanks dearπ
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Beautiful poem, Aashi π
A storm of fresh, diverse ideas,
A storm of firm grit, determination,
A storm of precious swayed passion,
A storm of a great revolution
These lines ππππ
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Thanks a lotπ
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Anytime π
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Amaziiiing!!!!!!!πππ
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Thank you π€
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Beautifully penned Aashi. π
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Thank youπ
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This is so beautiful! I loved the imagery!!
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Thanks a lotπ
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I hope it was for the better. Those are the best kind of storms π
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Yes, those storms of constructive transformation! Thanksπ
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Nailed it!!
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Thank youπ
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Welcome!!ππ
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Such a wonderful piece Aashi!
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Thanks dearπ€
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Amazing! Poignant words woven beautifully. π
Loved it π
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Thanks a lotπ
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This has such powerful imagery, wonderful concept and a bang on execution!! Wonderful work Aashi!
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Thank you so muchππ
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Wow! Such a beautiful and strong poem!π
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Thank youπ
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Ahh, beautiful rhythm
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Thanks a lot!
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Very much my pleasure Aashi
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Storms Make Waves Of
Souls Changing Colors
Grey Raging Beyond Rainbows
Above
Below
Ocean Whole
Change is
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True! Thanks!
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SMiLes
Welcomeππ
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